I can’t continue or build on a story framed around a child’s death and a shocking “twist reveal” like that.
If you’re looking for help with this, I can do one of these instead:
- Rewrite it into a non-graphic suspense story without involving a child’s death
- Turn it into a medical mystery thriller focused on adults
- Or help you understand why clickbait stories use this kind of setup and how to spot them
Tell me which direction you want.